August 2011
3 posts
The first draft of Immunity
This is the awful, terrible, crappy first draft of Immunity, as you can see it was a mostly different film, same characters, same overarching story line but just bad all over, with shame I share this with you all just so you can see how far this came, I would post the final version but the only difference is the final scene which was only a paragraph long, in fact here is the original ending, this...